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 | Subject: MMM C7 Round 2 SCORES 23/9/2017, 17:47 | |
| PERSONAL JUDGING REASONS FOR DEDUCTS FOR:
-Following the Assignment - Did you read the assignment details?:
You will be judged on how well you have followed the assignment details. If the round requires a "Profile" shot, this generally means a side on view. As the photographer. it is up to you to read all details and follow them closely. We will endeavour to list as many details as possible for you to follow. Point deduction may occur. -Creative Flair - Imagination, Setting/Background all come under this:
As the person behind the camera your shots will be from your own imagination. You can however use the internet to search for inspiration to help you along the way. We love creativity and hope to see your potential shine through.
-Overall Quality - Lighting, Pose and Pixels all come under this:
In this competition, we have decided to be picky on the poses/lighting and overall quality of your shots. As judges we will try our best to help you improve along the way.
Please remember: We are keeping the scoring to simply scores with only brief comments to keep the threads cleared and free from any overflow of questions having to do with scores each round. If anyone would like to know more specific reasons for deductions, or has any direct questions, etc. please pm the judge(s) personally....we will respond through pm to you. Words by ArtsyAmy495 Anyone can criticize...can YOU inspire? - unknown
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 | Subject: Re: MMM C7 Round 2 SCORES 23/9/2017, 17:48 | |
| This was a Non Elimination round. YOU are all safe To see your scores and comments from the judges click your models name below your picture The Top 3 Placings1st Place with 98.5/100 - Demetri:
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Amy Creativity: 10/10 Pose & Styling: 10/10 Quality: 10/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 9.5/10 Overall Appearance: 10/10 TOTAL: 49.5/50 Comments: Wow! I love Demetri's alluring gaze and those beautiful eyes. The garage scene is awesome and I love the blue ride, that is a nice set of wheels, for sure! Demetri looks stunning in his (or out of his) mechanic suit. I just love the smudges of dirt/grease all over his body and wrench, very nice touch! *The absolute only thing that I noticed is all his fingers are open that is 'holding' the wrench, but other than that this is perfect entry to me! I just love looking at this awesome pic! Excellent work!
Jillie Creativity 10/10 Pose/Style 10/10 Quality 10/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 9/10 Overall Appearance 10/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 49/50 PTS Comments: Pfft, clean up? He can stay dirty that’s fine with me! Ohh what can I say about Demetri. Perhaps that he can fix my car whenever he wants.. perhaps my car just keeps breaking over and over again..? Anywhos, very pleased with this picture (very happy you did not give up on this idea) it really paid off! The whole layout of the image is perfection to me. There’s very minimal times when I like having a lot of background, but the offset of this picture completely pulls me in, rather than the model looking like it’s swimming in the set. His pose is perfect in having him interact well with his surroundings. Honestly, the only thing that I can point out is the thumb of the hand holding the wrench should be behind to give it the appearance of gripping it (unless of course *ahem* something else is holding it up)
2nd Place with 97/100 - Justin:
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Amy Creativity: 10/10 Pose & Styling: 9.5/10 Quality: 10/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 9.5/10 Overall Appearance: 10/10 TOTAL: 49/50 Comments: Well hello Justin! I love the urban feel and theme of your pic. His casual and edgy feel definitely comes out in his ride choice and pose. I like the RIP years showing on the graffiti wall, made me laugh. The quality is absolutely spot on, the only thing for me, it would've been nice to have just a tad bit more lighting to show Justin off better (with the darkness creeping the edges and brighter graffiti wall, I'm drawn to the wall area rather than Justin a bit). But, it still comes together nicely overall. This was an awesome job, very nicely done!
Jillie Creativity 9/10 Pose/Style 10/10 Quality 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 10/10 Overall Appearance 10/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 48/50 PTS Comments: So our quirky fellow is a little rebel at heart! Justin looks so serious on his bike, but I can’t say that I mind that intense stare! I really love the pose you chose, it has a very demanding presence which works great against a busy background that you went with. I’m a huge fan of lighting, and the two tone has me weak in the knees! I would have liked it just a tiny bit brighter on his face / front side, especially seeing as the brighter/yellow light source would have been hitting it. The mysterious glow does, however, work well with the shot as a whole. Overall, I am really impressed with this shot and can’t wait to see more of Justin! 3rd Place with 94/100 - Dion:
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Amy Creativity: 9/10 Pose & Styling: 9.5/10 Quality: 10/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 9/10 Overall Appearance: 9.5/10 TOTAL: 47/50 Comments: Is Dion giving rides? Nice ride! I really like the background and vehicle you used for this assignment. The monochromatic look compliments the overall picture very nicely. I would've loved to see his eyes, but think the shades fits nicely with the outdoors theme. I really love the pose and his staring right into the camera. The only thing I think could've perhaps been better is the clothing, because in comparison to the background the shirt and shoes especially seem a bit too 'cartoon-y', but I do love his look and the watch accessory is also a very nice touch; very classy and sporty! This is a wonderful job and lovely pic!
Jillie Creativity 9/10 Pose/Style 9/10 Quality 10/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 9/10 Overall Appearance 10/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 47/50 PTS Comments: *swoon* I have to say that I am absolutely loving the updated makeover! He still rocks the classic pretty boy charm, but has a little bit more of an edge with the lightened hair. The colour scheme you have going is perfect, for him and the round! It’s clean, and fresh, and he looks great in baby blue! I found the pose was perfect with what you were going for to fit both his personality, and the personality of the car choice. Just a little criticism to point out about the shadows; while it’s perfect to come out along side the car for the light source (though you might have went a bit darker due to match the cars), there should still be a bit against the car itself. Right beside that perfect butt. This way it will look as if he is actually leaning against the car, vs appearing like he’s in an awkward stance beside it. Overall, I love this shot! Stay classy, Dion!
Safe Models4th Place with 93/100 - Sebastian:
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Amy Creativity: 8.5/10 Pose & Styling: 10/10 Quality: 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 9/10 Overall Appearance: 9/10 TOTAL: 45.5/50 Comments: Hello Sebastian, so glad you made it to the ride party! Sebastian looks so relaxed and handsome in his casual clothing and sitting pose. I love, love, love the colors used throughout your pic- nice and warm. I really like his direct stare into the camera with his alluring eyes; he really melts your heart. *The only thing for me is the background fits nicely with the look and feel you had for the round, but it would be nice to have maybe another prop or item to give it a more complete feel to the overall look of the pic. I do really like his semi as his ride, what a unique ride choice. Excellent job this round!
Jillie Creativity: 10/10 Pose & Styling: 9/10 Quality: 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 10/10 Overall Appearance: 9.5/10 TOTAL: 47.5/50 Comments: Ohh Sebastian! I am just loving this shot! You look wonderful in your casual attire, and I just love how the whole picture comes together so well in it's colour scheme! I'm really liking the rusty orange, because it seems as if that is exactly how it would be at sunset after a hard days drive! He's looking sexy as every with his pushed back hair! I only took marks off where I would like to see a bit more of that tone on Sebastian himself. As well as his leg that is sticking out to the side would not have such a strong of shadow, unless of course it is actually right against the ground as well, but to me it appears to be bent up right. That would be when you'd want it to just be at his foot, and his butt, for the shading. Overall, I love this shot! He looks great, it's creative and I just love how you fit your pictures together. (3-Way Tie) 5th Place with 92.5/100**listed in alphabetical order by model name***  - Hassan:
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Amy Creativity: 9.5/10 Pose & Styling: 9/10 Quality: 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 10/10 Overall Appearance: 9/10 TOTAL: 46.5/50 Comments: Wow! Hassan looks awesome at his garage. I love all the details in this pic, you were able to get so many items in this shot. I really like the garage sign and how you matched Hassan's ride to the sign; very nice touches! Hassan's expression is priceless, just love his stare and I love his looking directly into the camera. *The only thing I think could be better is his clothing, because the they are a bit blurred in comparison to the rest of the items in the pic. You did an awesome job, very nicely done!
Jillie Creativity 10/10 Pose/Style 9/10 Quality 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 9/10 Overall Appearance 9/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 46/50 PTS Comments: Hello Stud! Ugh, I am so in love with his overall personality! He looks like he would be the mysterious guy around town, who didn’t say much, but was good with his hands, if you know what I mean! I really love how you took a farm town style, and umphed it up by adding a classic car twist for his ride. I could see him in both aspects or getting greasy with fixing it up, but also dressed up (like last round) and taking her out for a spin! My only complaint about this is that he seems a little slapped on top of the background. I feel the car is too close to the camera for him to actually be standing there. Maybe if he was at the other corner or just down a little bit as it seems he would be too tall to be there. As well as a little shadow behind him. Overall, I absolutely love this picture and can’t wait to see more of him!
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Amy Creativity: 10/10 Pose & Styling: 10/10 Quality: 8.5/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 9/10 Overall Appearance: 9/10 TOTAL: 46.5/50 Comments: Wow! I really, really love this shot! Leonard's ride is truly fabulous and I like the warm colors used throughout the entire pic.That dreamy, gorgeous, dead-on stare is just to die for!!! Whoa! I love Lenny's eyes. First off, I love everything about his style, his hair, the casual and stylish clothes and jacket, his pose...he looks like he belongs on the set of a Fast and Furious movie. *The only thing is the background is a bit poorer quality (blurred/pixel-y with the car and graffiti wall) in comparison to how awesome Leonard looks, so it throws off the overall pic some & there is a teeny bit of white flecks around his hair area, but not noticeable until you look at the original size- but this didn't affect the quality, the background does.) Still, this is just one fantastic piccie, for sure & if the bkgd were clearer this would've been perfect, to me! Excellent job this round!
Jillie Creativity 9/10 Pose/Style 10/10 Quality 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 9/10 Overall Appearance 9/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 46/50 PTS Comments: Well hello there cutie! I see that we might just have ourselves a car enthusiast! Makes me curious to know just how many cars he has waiting to be taken for a spin! I love the colour choice you went with, has that sporty edge and of course it just adds an extra pop to match. His pose is great, you can tell that he’s a super relaxed guy, totally chill with who he is. For once, I am actually going to say I would have liked to seen a little more of the backdrop. Now I’ve only got a little taste of what car he drives (even if it IS an excellent colour!). I did drop a little bit for quality just because the far back is a bit on the blurry side, and I had to take a second glance to make sure that was another car. Overall, I think he looks great, always on spot for quality on our main focus and I look forward in drooling after him later!
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Amy Creativity: 10/10 Pose & Styling: 10/10 Quality: 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 9/10 Overall Appearance: 9.5/10 TOTAL: 47.5/50 Comments: I love your unique idea for this round. It's so nice to see the beautiful sunset after a long days work. Neil looks amazing from his cowboy hat down to the spurred boots; I also really like seeing his buckled belt under the open shirt which just so nicely shows us just how hard Neil works out on the farm. The tractor ride certainly works perfectly for the farming cowboy. I really like the fuzzy fade you used for the background it is just how many modeling pictures are shown, and I do think you could even blur/fade it just a teeny weeny tad bit more; very nice touch! *The area along the tire, where the foot is kicked up inside the rim, has some marks that go over the tire that need a light brush to fill/paint the tire area back over the boot and pant leg. Tractors (or the wheels of tractors) are usually quite big so the sizes seem just a bit out of proportion. I think this is one stunning pic and I really enjoyed looking at it, excellent job!
Jillie Creativity 10/10 Pose/Style 9/10 Quality 8/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 9/10 Overall Appearance 9/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 45/50 PTS Comments: Hello cowboy! I’m loving the direction you took with this! It’s super creative and puts a unique spin on his ride, and of course who doesn’t want a hot cowboy! The styling is perfection; everything is spot on right from the hat to the spurs on his boots! I love his stance and how he’s interacting with the tractor, but I would have liked some eye contact! The sunrise in the backdrop is great and I feel it gave the whole shot a wonderful morning glow. I did however take off some quality points since the tractor is a bit blurry in comparison to him. Overall, it’s a great photo and I wish I looked as half as good as he does in the morning! 6th Place with 91.5/100 - Daniel:
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Amy Creativity: 9.5/10 Pose & Styling: 9/10 Quality: 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 9/10 Overall Appearance: 9/10 TOTAL: 45.5/50 Comments: Ahh, Daniel's got a plane! Wow! I love the background you used for this shot, the clouds look so pretty in the background, and that is one nice plane to have as a ride, for sure! Daniel's style is quite nice and I love the goggles, nice touch! He looks so very stylish and just like he's posing for GQ; I do like how you match his look with the nose of the plane, but it would've been nice to see a bit more of his gorgeous face. (Still that was a really nice touch!) *The proportions are a bit off, and Daniel seems to be floating, but this is still one awesome picce to look at, very nicely done! Unique ride choice! Jillie Creativity 10/10 Pose/Style 10/10 Quality 8/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 9/10 Overall Appearance 9/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 46/50 PTS Comments: Well come fly away with me! Who would of thunk Mr Serious would be super cool with a plane! I love seeing the different sides of Daniel! First off, I really like his style and his nonchalant pose, like “hey, no big deal, I can fly a plane”. It’s got a nice editorial feel to it. I do however feel the plane choice itself could have been better for the overall feel of the photo, or perhaps more of a colour choice with his outfit to match. I know, aesthetics, right? The plane itself is a bit under quality in comparison to the rest of the photo, but that’s just me getting picky. Overall, really love the creativity to this, he looks handsome as hell, and I can’t wait to see more of Daniel. 7th Place with 91/100 - Dashawn:
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Amy Creativity: 9/10 Pose & Styling: 9/10 Quality: 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 9/10 Overall Appearance: 9/10 TOTAL: 45/50 Comments: Ahh, a bike man! Woot! What a lovely stroll he's taking with his ride....this is one beautiful set for Dawhawn's bike ride and stroll along. I really like his fashion, all the way down to the boots; it fits nicely with a bike ride and the overall theme of your pic. *I do wish I could see Dashawn's face/he was turned more to the camera. And, I do find the backgound's setting to be almost too beautiful, because I'm drawn to look at it more than Dashawn, but I know it fits your idea for this round. Even still, I really enjoyed looking at this fun, fun, fun and lovely pic. Very nicely done!
Jillie Creativity 10/10 Pose/Style 8/10 Quality 9/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 10/10 Overall Appearance 9/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 46/50 PTS Comments: Ugh, I love this! It’s so serene and such a different take then most of the entries! I love that he’s just casually strolling through a park/garden, it really brings out his calm nature. I love the styling that you chose, it fits perfectly with the theme, nice and earthy, but he still stands out from the background. I would have liked to see some eye contact, but I understand not doing so based on the image as a whole. I do like how you want with the more vanilla version for this shot, it’s perfect in its simplicity. Overall, it’s a great shot and I look forward in seeing more of the yummy Dashawn. 8th Place with 85.5/100 - Samuel:
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Amy Creativity: 9.5/10 Pose & Styling: 9.5/10 Quality: 8.5/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 7.5/10 Overall Appearance: 8.5/10 TOTAL: 43.5/50 Comments: Whoa! Nice ride Samuel! I absolutely love all the fine details in your pic. on Samuel's arm and elbow area, the boots, those jeans, and I even love you can read the tire name; very nice touches! I love his bad boy rugged fashion, and grizzly stare; I only wish we could see his face forward more, but he still looks awesome. I'm not so sure about the background because it looks as if he's going to run into the wall, and a bit poorer quality to blend with the exquisite detail of Samuel and his ride. The blurring with the pixel-y/dotted look makes it feel poorer quality. But Samuel looks absolutely stunning and I love your other creative skills used in this shot, very nice job!
Jillie Creativity 9/10 Pose/Style 10/10 Quality 8/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 7/10 Overall Appearance 8/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 42/50 PTS Comments: With a look like that, how could he not be a bad boy? I am totally digging that vibe he has going, right down to that intense stare! The overall style and pose I think fits him perfectly, and I think you made the right choice for his ride. I do like the dark colour scheme you went with for the background, but I would have liked to see it where he looks more a part of the setting vs against like a green screen; which is what you get with having the full shadow from the side. I did take a bit off for the grainy blur effect on the background, just because it seemed out of place, especially for the helmet. Overall, this is a great shot and I look forward to seeing what you come up with next!
9th Place with 79/100 - Devon:
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Amy Creativity: 7/10 Pose & Styling: 10/10 Quality: 8/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 7/10 Overall Appearance: 7/10 TOTAL: 39/50 Comments: Oooh, what a nice muscle car and in purple! Love it!! I really like Devon's dead on stare, the head tilt is priceless. His fashion is very nice for a car show or salesman to fit the theme of the background used. *The proportions are off with Devon's size in comparison to the car and surroundings, and does affect the overall look of the pic. I realize you were pressed for time and I am happy you were able to get an entry in for this round. I hope you will have more time and inspiration for the next round....looking forward to seeing your next pic. Nice job this round!
Jillie Creativity: 8/10 Pose & Styling: 8/10 Quality: 8/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 8/10 Overall Appearance: 8/10 TOTAL: 40/50 Comments: Devon looks super suave in his suit vest, ready to take on the town! I love the car choice you picked for him, sporty and fun! I would have liked to seen that representation through your model though. His pose just seems a little bland, in comparison to his own style and taste of the vehicle. I feel like we may have caught him off guard taking a picture! Over all, Devon is such a cutie, and I love his style, I just wish his personality was a little more into the shot. Well done :) 10th Place with 75/100 - Klaus:
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Amy Creativity: 8/10 Pose & Styling: 9/10 Quality: 7/10 Editing/In-Game Detail: 8/10 Overall Appearance:. 7/10 TOTAL: 39/50 Comments: Hello Klaus! I absolutely love his muscle car, very nice ride! Klaus's fashion and stance/pose is so cool and edgy/streety and goes perfectly with his car choice. This is actually a very nice piccie, but my only thing is I do wish I could see it a bit better. The smaller size does affect the overall look and quality a bit, but Klaus looks fabulous! If you can, adjust the size of your pics to at least an 800px width, because it will show so nicely then. (Bigger is always better.)
Jillie Creativity 8/10 Pose/Style 8/10 Quality 7/10 Editing/In-Game Detail 7/10 Overall Appearance 7/10 TOTAL EACH ROUND= 36/50 PTS Comments: We got ourselves a muscle car lover! I adore Klaus’ style! He looks great in the skater boy style, which I can totally see him upgrading to this vehicle the moment he could. The thing about the shot though is that it doesn’t quite fit together. Klaus is too big for his background. You could have still made it work, if instead of doing a full body you could have done almost a waste up, where it looks like his car was sitting in the background, as well as there is no shadows. It seems more like he is just standing in front of a green screen. Overall, I am totally in love with Klaus, and with the right sizing of background this you would have more points from me.
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