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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   24/6/2012, 13:12

it's 1:30am Saturday morning. and Jenna Wilson is just about to go home after being at her horse culbs party night. but as she is about to go to her car to go home, she sees Leah Jenson walking across the car park from a wooded are on her own. Jenna thinks this is strange. why is Leah here on her own.



Jenna still watching Leah walk to her car from behind a tree.



so Jenna phones Jack to tell him what she has just seen.



Jack : hello ??
Jenna : Jack it's me.
Jack : you ok ?? whats wrong ??
Jenna : i'm ok. i have just seen Leah at the horse club. she was walking through the grounds to her car.



Jenna : she is just driving away now.
Jack : who is she with ??
Jenna : she is on her own. but it's strange, why was she walking from a wooded are to her car ?? and on her own
Jack : mmmm very strange.
Jenna : ok i will be home soon.
Jack : ok my love.



back at the Jenson's. Leah is creeping in to bed trying not to wake Stev. mmmm something is definately going on.



it's 8am in the Wilson's house. Jack and Jenna are chatting about Leah and Stev.

Jenna : so what do you think about last night ??
Jack : i'm not sure, but it's very strange for Leah to be at the horse club. and on her own that late.
Jenna : do you think Stev known where she was ??
Jack : i don't know.
Jenna : somethings not right.
Jack : it's funny you saying it like that. when Sarah came home from her friends on Thursday, she said she felt something was wrong with Leah ans Stev.
Jenna : what do you mean ??
Jack : well first she said she knows it's wrong to listen to adults talk. but she said they fight alot when she is there.
Jenna : thats not like them to fight in front of the kids.
Jack : Sarah also said Stev is alway nice and kind to her. but Leah is not the same anymore.
Jenna : very strange. Leah is always good with our girls.
Jack : well Sarah don't think so. maybe i should say something to Stev about it. ??
Jenna : i don't know.
Jack : i think Stev will tak to me if i ask.
Jenna : ok see what he says.
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   24/6/2012, 23:09

Just caught up with your story Jack. Very nice indeedy! Can't wait to find out what's going on here!!!!!!!!!? thinking bravo



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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   24/6/2012, 23:39



oh dear. what do we have here. looks like Leah Jenson as been playing around with another guy. but hold on one seconds. who's this coming along ??



the last person you would want to catch you doing this. it's Jack Wilson.

Jack : hey you. what do you are doing.
Leah : mmmmmm
Jack : yeah i thought so, i bet i'm the last one you thought would catch you out.
Unknown Man : look mr. get lost.
Jack : you don't know who your dealing pal. i think it's you that needs to get lost.
Leah : Dean, i think you better go.
Jack : yeah you better go DEAN.
Dean : you don't scare me.
Leah : uuummm Dean you better go, and you should be scared of him. and like he said you don't know who you are dealing with.
Dean : ok ok i will see you later.

Jack is now talking to Leah.
Leah : jack, please don't do or say anything.
Jack : now tell me why i shouldn't ??
Leah : please don't Jack, what about my kids ??
Jack : you should have thought about that before you started all this. what in hell did Stev do to deserve this ??
Leah : nothing Jack But,
Jack : there is no but Leah. he don't deserve this. right i'm off go and finish this or i will.
Leah : ok ok Jack, but please don't do anything.

so Leah go's off to finish it with Dean. so Jack thinks. but then Jack thinks to himself, if she can do this to Stev. what to say that she wont finish it.
so Jack go's storming in to the Bar where this Dean Man just happens to work.



Jack : right now you listen here DEAN, your not going to see her ever again ok.
Dean : why and what can you do about it ??
Jack : right i told you you don't know who your dealing with. so i'm going to deal with this myself

so with that Jack gives Dean a bit of a slap. and then Dean pushes his luck and gives Jack a punch. so Jack says right thats it. so Jack go's to town on him. punch to the face, punch to the stomach and then one big punch to the nose and Dean hits the floor.





then Dean leaves the bar. and Jack shouts out, and you better leave town to.

then Jack go's to see Stev.



Jack : sorry it's so late Stev but i had to come and see you.
Stev : why whats wrong ??
Jack : it's really hard for me to tell you this, but Leah has been seeing another guy. i just caught then out side a bar in town.
Stev : gggaaaarrrrr i know she was up to something but i didn't think it was something like this. who is this guy.
Jack : you don't need to worry about the other guy Stev, iv'e taken care if him.
Stev : what do you mean ??
Jack : put it this way. his face don't look that good. i told him to get lost. and he would not listen. so i sorted him out. i don't think we will see him again.
Stev : so where is Leah now ??
Jack : now Now Stev, don't go doing something silly now.
Stev : don't worry Jack i'm not. i just want to talk to her. i will ask her where has she been. and if she don't come clean about what she has been doing then she is out tonight.
Jack : and if she dose come clean about it ??
Stev : then we will talk. and try to sort it out.
Jack : ok Stev. if you need us for anything you call us.
Stev : ok Jack, thank you for everything.
Jack : you would do the same if it was the other way round.

after about 1 hour after Jack had left Leah comes home. Stev was out side waiting for her.



Leah : hi hun.
Stev : hi, so whay ya been doing tonight.
Leah : just been down the bar with a friend.
Stev : did you have a good night ??
Leah : yeah, it was ok.
Stev : so why do you look like you have been crying.
Leah : oh we have been laughing a bit and my makeup got smudged.
Stev : mmmm i don't beleave you. Leah i know everything ??
Leah : it's not what you think.



Stev : what is it then, tell me what is it ??
Leah : have you seen Jack to Night.
Stev : why should i have seen him. what has Jack got to do with this.
Leah : so you've not seen Jack then.
Stev : just tell me whats going on.
Leah : nothing has been going on. i see jack will i was out. thats all.
Stev. yes i did see Jack. and he told me everything. you kissing some guy. and about what Jack did to him.
Leah : now crying. i'm sorry i'm sorry. it's over. i wont do this to you again. i promise. hun i'm really sorry. we can work this out.
Stev : i know we can work this out. by you leaving now. just go.
Leah : please don't do this. please we can work it out.



Stev : no thats it. i want you to go. just go.



the following morning Stev and Simon are sat outside having breakfast.

Simon : Stev, are you ok ??
Stev : yeah i'm ok
Simon : you look like something is wrong.
Stev : mmm you could say that.
Simon : why what up Stev, you can talk to me mate.
Stev : Leah's gone mate
Simon : what do you mean gone??
Stev : i told her to go. Jack came to see me lastnight to say he see her kissing some guy outslide a Bar in town.
Simon : i'm really sorry to hear that. are you sure he got it right.
Stev : yes he did. he beat the guy up aswel. Leah owned upto it in the end to.
Simon : i'm really sorry mate. with a little laugh, i bet the other guy is in a bit of a mess. Jack's a tuff guy. i wouldn't wont to get on his bad side.
Stev : yeah Jack is a tuff guy. and he's a very good friend to. more like my brother.
Simon : well don't you go doing anything silly now. and don't worry about anything around here. if you need anything you just ask.
Stev : thanks Simon, i will be ok.

Jenna and Jack are at the local swimming pool. wile they are there, Jenna tries to call Stev.



Jenna : waving at Jack , he's not picking up his phone
Jack ; i'm sure he will be ok



Jenna : but jack, i know him, i know what he is like.
Jack : i'm sure he just wants sometime to think about things
Jenna : but you don't know him like i do. he and Leah have had bad times before, and he always picks up the phone if it's me.
Jack : ok so we will go and see if he is at home.
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   24/6/2012, 23:40

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Just caught up with your story Jack. Very nice indeedy! Can't wait to find out what's going on here!!!!!!!!!? thinking bravo

thanks Amy. i was posting more as you commented. lol luv u luv u
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   24/6/2012, 23:50

ooooh the little madam doing the dirty on Steve like that angry angry angry I wouldnt want to mess with jack either Hide this is good honey keep it coming now you got me hooked again hearty luvs


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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   25/6/2012, 00:10

thanks hunny. i will as i'm quite enjoying doing it again. :) there is a good bit coming up soon. :) luv u luv u
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   25/6/2012, 00:16

Great no Fantastic read, I wonder what good ol Steve is up to. I can't wait to find out.
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   21/12/2012, 23:21

Hi everyone. sorry it's been so long since i last updated this story.

but you will be happy to know i will be starting again. i will be putting pen to paper tonight to plain out where i will go next with this story. :) luv u luv u
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   22/12/2012, 04:08

looking forward to it hun

more love more love more love


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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   22/12/2012, 05:27

i will have to start thing up tomorrow. off to bed in a bit. too funny too funny maybe. :) luv u luv u
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   23/12/2012, 18:48

I'm looking forward to it too JackMan! I haven't seen any good sim stories for awhile! It's always nice to get on and just follow them, you know? Can't wait to see the next edition!!! WOO-WOO!!!! luv u



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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   24/12/2012, 00:01

Thanks Amy. it's about time i done some more. lol luv u luv u
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   27/12/2012, 14:19

Here we go with some more to my story.

After Jenna getting on at Jack saying she is worried about Steve not picking up her calls they arrive at Steve's home. where Steve is at the poolside chatting with Simon.



Jenna moaning at Steve.
Jenna: Steve what going on ?
Steve: What do you mean ?
Jenna: I have been trying to call you all day.
Steve: Oh sorry, my mobile is in the house and i have changed the house number. i meant to let you and Jack know i had changed it. But i got
chatting to Simon about everything that has been going on. Sorry.



Jenna: (Pointing at Steve) Don't do that to me again. i have been worried about you all day, i thought something had happened to you. ( Jenna gives Steve a hug in relief that he is ok)





Jack: See i told you he would be ok.
Steve: I'm ok honest. I'm not going to let it get me down, Plus i need to think about the kid's.



Simon: Don't worry Jenna, If i feel something is wrong i will give you and Jack a call. and i will keep him busy playing pool and darts and stuff.
Jack: Don't worry so much Jenna, he's ok, and Simon is here, plus Angel is around quite a lot to.
Simon: Yeah my sister is a grate help around her. plus she enjoys it here because she can use the swimming pool. so as she can use the pool and the gym
she likes to do a bit of cleaning for Steve around the house as a thank you.
Steve: She's a grate cook to.
Jenna: Don't you take advantage to much of that. She's not your maid you know.
Steve: (Laughing) I wouldn't do that. She's to kind of a person to do that to.
Jenna: Just make sure you don't.
Simon: I would (Laughing)
Jack: (Laughing) But that's ok for you to say that, She's your sister.
Simon: True.

Jenna walks off in to the house and Steve,Jack and Simon are sill Laughing.



Jack: (now chatting to Steve on his own) Are you sure your ok ?
Steve: Yeah i'm good Jack, don't worry i will let you know if there is anything wrong.
Jack: So dose Luke and Cleo know yet.
Steve: No not yet. I think i'm going to have to tell them to night. well at lest Luke anyway.

Mean while Angel and Cleo are out shopping.



Angel: So have you had fun "Cleo"?
Cleo: It's been really fun, thank you so much for bringing me shopping with you.
Angel: your most welcome Cleo. Do you fancy something to eat ?
Cleo: yes please. all that shopping has made me hungry.
Angel: (Laughing) Me to.

Angel and Cleo now sitting outside a cafe in town

Cleo: "Angel"
Angel: Yes Cleo.
Cleo: if i was to ask you something would you tell me the truth ?
Angel: That all depends on what it is you want to ask me.
Cleo: (Just smiles)
Angel: What up hunnie. is there something on your mind ?
Cleo: Oh it's nothing really, just me being silly.
Angel: now now hunnie, if there is something bothering you, you can talk to me about it.
Cleo: well it's more of a bad feeling, i feel something is wrong with my Mum and Dad.
Angel: What makes you say that ?
Cleo: I hear them fight a lot when me and Luke are in bed, and sometimes in front of us.
Angel: Ican't say i've heard them or see them fight.
Cleo: Luke say's it's just a adult thing.
Angel: Maybe his right hun. But still if it was me i would not do it in front of you or Luke.
Cleo: i think something is wrong though, my Mum don't do anything with us anymore.
Angel: I'm sure she don't mean to be like that. i know she is very busy at times doing paper work.
Cleo: It's things in the house and like this, going shopping. she never has time anymore (Cleo starts crying)
Angel: (Putting her arm around Cleo) Now now hunnie. i'm sure it's just because she is busy.
Cleo: Sometimes i don't want to go home.
Angel: Aww hunnie. whats your Dad like with you ?
Cleo: My Dad is the best. he is so funny. and silly to, but in and funny way. he always tells me he loves me and asks how i'm doing at School.
and asks if i'm happy at School and am i doing ok with home work, and to let him know if i need any help.
Angel: Aww that's nice. his a nice guy you Dad, but i like your Mum to.
Cleo: Yeah he is. but i wish my Mum was more like you.
Angel: She seams ok to me.
Cleo: mmmm yeah when she has time to be.
Angel: It can't be that bad.
Cleo: I'm afraid it is, like i said, i wish she was more like you.
Angel: But why me ?
Cleo: Because your funny,caring, thoughtful and helpful. and although you work hard you always find time to help others.
and you help my Dad a lot to.
Angel: Thank you Cleo, your so kind. i help your Mum and Dad by doing some cleaning because they let me use their swimming pool and the gym.

Angel's phone is ringing.



Angel: (Picking up the call) "Hello"
Steve: Hi Angel. how's my little girl ??
Angel: She's fine, do you want to talk to her ?
Steve: Yes please.

Angel passes phone to Cleo.



Cleo: Hi Dad.
Steve: Hi. have you been good for Angel ?
Cleo: Of course, i'm always good.
Steve: so what time you coming home ?
Cleo: Soon i think. (Angel say's soon) yeah soon Angels said.
Steve: ok as long as your enjoying yourself.
Cleo: I'ts been fun.
Steve: Ok put Angel back on.
Cleo: Ok
Angel: "Hello"
Steve: hope she's not taken up to much of you day.
Angel: Not at all. it's been fun.
Steve: Are you sure she is ok, she sounds like she's been crying ?
Angel: She's ok. i will chat to you about it later. but she's ok honest.
Steve: Ok. i trust you. Bye for now.
Angel: Bye.

Angel: (now talking to Cleo) Your Dad could tell you had been crying.
Cleo: Ok.
Angel: Do you mind if i talk to your Dad about everything you told me. because i think your Dad should know how you are feeling.
Cleo: Ok. But please don't tell him what i said about i wish my Mum was more like you.
Angel: I wont say a thing hunnie.
Cleo; Maybe i will ask if i can stay at Roseanna's to night.

Angel and Cleo are now back home.



Cleo: Hi Dad
Steve: Hi, so you enjoyed it then.
Cleo: We had lots of fun. "Dad"
Steve: "Yes"
Cleo: Can i stay at Roseanna's tonight ?
Steve: If Jenna and Jack say yes it's fine with me.
Cleo: I asked already and they said if it's ok with you i can.
Steve: ok
Cleo: Thanks Dad. Where's Mum ??
Steve: She's at the Stables i think. But i will let her know you are staying at Roseanna's.
Cleo: Ok, i'm going to get my things to take to Roseanna's.
Steve: Ok sweetie.



Steve: (Now talking to Angel) Thank you for taking Cleo shopping today.
Angel: Your welcome Steve. i've enjoyed it to.
Steve: So what was Cleo crying about. is she ok ?
Angel: She's ok, But can i come back a bit later and talk to you about it. I would rather talk to you and Leah at the same time.
Steve: Leah's not coming back. She's not living here anymore.
Angel: What do you mean she's not living here anymore ??
Steve: We are not a couple anymore.
Angel: Aww Steve, i'm so sorry to hear that (Firmly holding Steve's arm with sympathy)



Steve: Some things are just not meant to last.
Angel: Still it's a shame. do you mind if i pop back when Luke is sleeping, then i can talk to you about Cleo. she knows i'm going to talk to you about it.
But i don't think we should while Luke is still awake.
Steve: Ok that's fine, Luke should be in bed about 10 ish.
Angel: Ok so i will be back about 10-10:30, it that ok ?
Steve: Ok i will see you later. you can take the keys to my BMW if you like. save you paying for a Taxi.
Angel: are you sure.
Steve: Yeah it fine.
Angel: Ok i will see you later. Bye
Steve: Bye

Steve: (Now talking to Cleo) You going now ?
Cleo: Yep i'm all ready.
Steve: (Giving Cleo a hug) Ok see you tomorrow.



Cleo: See you tomorrow Dad.



Steve: (Calling Leah)
Leah: "Hello"
Steve: It's me
Leah: Oh "Hi"
Steve: I just wanted to let you know Cleo is staying at Roseanna's tonight, so if you want to talk to her she will be there.
Leah: Have you said anything to Cleo or Luke yet ??
Steve: Not to Cleo no. But i'm going to talk to Luke in a minute though. and then i will talk to Cleo tomorrow.
Leah: "Steve" can't we just sort thing out between us. i know we can.
Steve: No, you had your chance. Bye.
Leah: But Steve, we can fix this. (Pause of silence) "Steve" you still there. (Steve has hung up)




Steve calls Luck



Luke: Yes Dad.
Steve: Can you come up stairs please.
Luke: Coming Dad.
Luke: Whats up Dad ?
Steve: I need you to do something for me son.
Luke: Ok
Steve: I need you to be strong for me. i need you to try to be a man as much as you can now that you have almost left School.
Luke: Whats going on Dad, what do you mean you need me to be strong.
Steve: You know me and your Mum have been fighting quite a lot.
Luke: Yes, whats happened ?
Steve: Well the reason why we have been fighting is because you Mum has been seeing some guy.
Luke: What do you mean seeing some guy, what like a boyfriend, lover something like that.
Steve: Yes, so i've told her she had to leave and go live with the other guy.
Luke: So you kicked her out, Can't you fix it.
Steve: No, sorry son it can't be fixed.
Luke: How long has it been going on ?
Steve: For a long time. Jenna and Jack have both seen you Mum with this guy.
Luke: They mite have got it wrong Dad.
Steve: No Luke they have not. Jack has seen them kissing and i have asked your Mum about it, and she has admitted to seeing this guy.
Luke: Ok so what happens now ?
Steve: Well i'm still going to live here. and it's up to you if you want to stay here or if you want to live with your Mum.
Luke: I want to stay here, i don't want to live with my Mum and with some other guy, this is my home.
Steve: This will always be your home son. i'm so sorry about this.
Luke: Why are you saying sorry, you haven't done anything wrong.
Steve: I know son. but i'm still sorry.
Luke: We will be ok. dose Cleo know yet.
Steve: Not yet. i will talk to her tomorrow.
Luke: Ok.
Steve: Angel will be coming back soon to talk to me about Cleo crying to day.
Luke: Why was Cleo crying.
Steve: I don't know yet.
Luke: so you want me to stay in my room ?
Steve: no, you can play Pool and other games till 11:00pm but if you need to come in to the lounge knock first.
Luke: Ok Dad. i'm going back down to my room.
Steve: Ok son, "Love You"
Luke: "Love You To Dad"

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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   27/12/2012, 14:38

this is great so far hunny, love how easy it flows, looking forward to the next instalment

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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   27/12/2012, 22:15

Thanks Hun. it will be coming soon. :) luv u luv u luv u
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   27/12/2012, 23:18

This story is sad. unhappy


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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   27/12/2012, 23:33

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This story is sad. unhappy

lol. your going to need some tissues for the next bit. but it dose get better. :)
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   28/12/2012, 01:26

WOW Jack! This story is just totally amazing! I'm at the edge of my seat holding my breath, biting my nails and waiting for the continuation! What will Cleo say? Will she have a total melt down? And what about Angel and Steve? Do I sense a romantic interest coming?????? Will Steve and Leah work things out and try to save their marriage? OH the possibilities with this story are endless!!!!!




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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   28/12/2012, 11:11

@ mamajanaynay. Thank you for taking the time to read my story. as for your thoughts on where this could possibly go next will all be clear soon. :) luv u luv u
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   28/12/2012, 20:39

Angel arrives back at Steve's home.



Angel: Hi steve.
Steve: Hi. Would you like a drink or anything ?
Angel: no thank you, i'm fine. ok so we need to talk about Cleo crying today.
Steve: Yes, i could tell when i spoke to her on the phone that she had been crying.
Angel: Yeah poor thing, We had been talking about you and Leah fighting.
Steve: Yeah we had been fighting quite a lot. But they will not hear anymore of that in this house.
Angel: That's good to hear because it's really upsetting Cleo. i know you said you and Leah are over, But with Cleo crying today
she also told me she thought something was wrong.
Steve: Ok, so this sounds like i'm going to have a hard time with telling Cleo me and her Mum have split up. Cleo is very close to her Mum
so i think she is not going to take it very well.
Angel: mmmm i don't think she is as close to her Mum like you think.
Steve: What do you mean.
Angel: Well the feeling i get from Cleo is, That her Mum don't do anything with her anymore, or not enough.
Steve: mmmm i guess not,
Angel: Well your be happy to know she loves you very much and said you always ask her how she is.
Steve: Well i do try my best to be a good Father to them both.
Angel: You seam to be a good Father to me Steve:
Steve: Thanks Angel.
Angel: Your welcome, and it's true.
Steve: Cleo really enjoyed shopping today, i've not seen her smile like that in a long time.
Angel: Yeah i know, She's a good girl to.
Steve: Yeah she is, i spoke to Luke while waiting for you to come back.
Angel: Ok, How did he take it.
Steve: A lot better than i thought he would,
Angel: He's growing up so quick, and he's a good lad to, or should i say "Man"
Steve: To quick.
Angel: So did he say where we wants to stay.
Steve: Here, he said i'm "Not staying with my Mum and some "GUY", my home is here.
Angel: Ok, so at lest you know Luke is ok.
Luke: (Knock's on lounge door)
Steve: Yes Luke.
Luke: I'm going to bed now Dad,
Steve: Ok, Night son.
Luke: Good night Dad, Good night Angel.
Angel: Good night Luke.
Steve: Yeah i think Luke will be ok.
Angel: Well Steve i must get going home now, i got a early start tomorrow.
Steve: Ok, thank you so much for telling me everything.
Angel: Your welcome Steve, if you need my help with anything feel free to ask me.
Steve: Ok thanks Angel, see you soon.
Angel: well if i'm not to tired tomorrow i might come over and use the pool.
Steve: Ok maybe see you tomorrow.
Angel: Ok Bye for now.
Steve: Bye.

Now Angel has gone home, Steve decides to send his Mother and Father an email about everything that's been going on.



and then Steve dose a few things around the house before going to bed.

Mean while im Steve's family home town his Father Roger gets his email he sent.



Roger: (Shouting out to Amelia Steve's Mother) "Amelia"
Amelia: Yes hunnie.
Roger: I've got an email from Steve you need to come and read.
Amelia; Coming, What dose it say.
Roger: Ok, it's not good, but he's.

Message Reads

Dear Mum & Dad

Sorry it's been a while since i last emailed you all back home. But i have some bad news. Me and Leah are splitting up.
We have been fighting quite a lots the last few months and it's just not working out.
with out going in to it to much i've thrown her out of the house. She has been seeing some other guy behind my back.
Put don't worry about me because i'm fine. i will give you a call soon and talk to you more about it all. and maybe come and see
you all with the kids.

Love you all Steve. XX

Roger: Poor Lad.
Amelia: It's about time he got rid of her.
Roger: Now now. were not going to get involved, He's a grown Man now and he's more than capable of sorting it out himself.
Amelia: Ok but i never did like her.
Roger: I was not that keen on her either.
Amelia: What time is it there now.
Roger: Well they are 4 hours in front of us, so it will be 11:30pm if it is 7:30 here.
Amelia: Ok he should still be up, give him a call.
Roger: Ok but i will talk to him, i know what your like.
Amelia: Ok.

Roger: (Calling Steve)



Steve: "Hello"
Roger: Hi son, you ok.
Steve: hi Dad, yeah i'm ok.
Roger: I just got your email, i'm so sorry to hear what has happened.
Steve: i'm ok, some things are just not meant to be.
Roger: As long as you and the kid's are ok.
Steve: Yeah we will be ok Dad,
Roger: Well let us know if you need anything Son.
Steve: I will Dad. I'm thinking of coming to see you all next month.
Roger: Ok Will be good to see you and the kid's again.
Steve: Ok Dad i don't mean to sound rude, but i really need to get some sleep>
Roger: Ok son, you get some rest and we will talk or see you soon. Bye Son.
Steve: Bye Dad, give my love to everyone.
Roger: Will do, Bye


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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   28/12/2012, 20:46

this is so good and its getting better and better

love2u love2u love2u


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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   28/12/2012, 21:01

Thanks hun. :) luv u luv u luv u
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   29/12/2012, 16:59

Again...sitting on the edge of my seat, here! I am so hooked on this story, Oh my gosh! I have to say Jack, your wording is awesome, even if you didn't have the pic's to go with your story, you make the reader feel like they are right there, like a fly on the wall.


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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   30/12/2012, 02:37

Thanks mamajanaynay. so glad your enjoying it. there is a really good bit coming up. it's very True to life. something that could very easy happen in anyone's life. and sadly dose happen in some. :) luv u luv u
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PostSubject: Re: How It All Started   1/1/2013, 17:18

The next day Steve go's to get Cleo from Jack & Jenna's home.

Steve talking to Jenna.



Steve: Hi Jenna.
Jenna: Hi Steve.
Steve: Hows Cleo, Has she been good.
Jenna: She's always good when she comes here, I think she's just coming down now.
Steve: Ok, Ihave a chat with Luke last night about everything.
Jenna: How did he take it ?
Steve: Better than i thought he would, (He said i'm not living with my Mum and some guy)
Jenna: Well at lest you know Luke will be ok.
Steve: Yeah, I just need to talk to Cleo now, i was thinking of asking Angel if she wouldn't mind being around when i talk to Cleo.
So she has someone she can talk to if she needs to, as i think she will take the news hard.
I spoke to Angel last night after they got back from shopping, Angel said Cleo had been crying.
Jenna: What was she crying for ?
Steve: Angel thought i should know Cleo had been crying because of all the fighting i had been doing with Leah.
Jenna: Ok, so Cleo had told all this to Angel.
Steve: Yeah, So i guess she feels safe with Angel and trust her to.
Jenna: So yeah i think it would be a good idea to have Angel around when you talk to Cleo. and it's good to know
Cleo has someone else other than me and Jack she can talk to. plus Cleo can always go to Angel while sheis at School to if she needs to.
Steve: She must trust Angel a lot as she said she was ok for Angel to talk to me about how she is feeling.
Jenna: i have known Angel for a long time, and i'm sure she would be happy to help where she can.
Steve: That's funny you should say that, as that was the last thing Angel said before she went home last night.
Jenna: Have you spoke to your family at all yet ?
Steve: Yeah, i sent them a email last night after Angel left, and then with in 30 minutes my Father called.
Jenna: What did he say, i know your Mum didn't like her much.
Steve: My Father just wanted to make sure i was ok, But i could hear my Mother in the background saying how she didn't like her anyway.
Jenna: To be honest Steve, this is a very bad thing Leah has done to you and the kid's, i don't thing i can ever forgive her for what she has done.
Steve: It's up to you how you want to be with Leah, You have been friends for ever. i would never ask you to take sides.
Jenna: I didn't think you would Steve. But if i do talk to her again it don't be for a long time, pluss Jack has told me her don't want her round here.
Steve: Yeah i think Jack has really taken it to heart.
Jenna: Yeah he has, That guy she is seeing was very lucky to have got out of that bar in one piece.
Steve: (Laughing) I would loved to have seen it. i wouldn't want to get on Jack's bad side.
Jenna: Well i know he done 9 years in the Army before i met him, and i know he has done some bad things in his past. but he has a good heart.
and i know he thinks of you like a Brother. we both do.
Steve: I know and i feel the same about you both to.

(Cleo coming down the stairs)



Cleo: Hi Dad.
Steve: Hi swetie. Have you had a nice time.
Cleo: Yeah i alway enjoy staying here.
Jenna: And we enjoy having you here to.



Cleo: Thanks for letting me stay Jenna.
Jenna: Your most welcome Cleo, you can stay anytime you like.
Steve: Ok let go. Thank for everything Jenna.
Jenna: Your welcome Steve, See you soon.
Steve: Ok, Bye
leo: Bye Jenna.
Jenna: Bye Steve,Cleo.

(When Steve and Cleo get home Angel had just finished using the swimming pool. so Steve has a chat with Angel.)



Steve: Hi Angel.
Angel: Hi Steve
Steve: Are you in any rush to go anywhere.
Angel: Now, Why is something wrong.
Steve: Oh no, it's just i'm going to have a chat with Cleo about everythingand i was going to ask if you wouldn't mind hanging around
just in case Cleo need someone she can run to if she needs to.
Angel: Of course i can Steve. i would be more than happy to be hear for Cleo , and you if you need me to be.
Steve: Thank you so much Angel, Your such a good friend.
Angel: No problem at all Steve



(Cleo Comes out to talk to her Dad)



Cleo: You said you wanted to talk to me about something Dad.
Steve: yesterday you asked me where your Mum was.
Cleo: Yes, what is it Dad, whats wrong.
Steve: well your Mum's not coming home, Because we are not to gether anymore.
Cleo: What do you mean, whats going on, why are you not together anymore.
Steve: because Cleo your Mum has been seeing another Man behind my back. and when i thought she was here with you and Luke
while i have been at work she has been with the other man.
Cleo: How long has this been going on.
Steve: A Long time, That's Why we have been fighting a lot.
Cleo: So whats going to happen now.
Steve: Well me and your Mum are finished, but i would still like you to stay here with me and Luke, but it's put to you where you want to stay.
Cleo: So dose Luke know.
Steve: Yes Luke knows. i spoke to him last night while you were at Jenna's home.
Cleo: (Now really starting to get upset) So who else knows.
Steve: Well Jack and Jenna know as they where the first to see your Mum with the other Man. and now you and Luke, and i spoke to Angel last night to.

(Angel walks out on to the patio area and Cleo runs straight in to her arms)



Angel: It's ok, i'm here, let it out have a good cry if you need to.
Cleo: How could my Mum do this to us.

(Angel looks across at Steve and thinks to herself what do i say)

Angel: I don't know sweetie, i think you need to ask your Mum that, all i can do is be here for you if you need me to talk to.

(Just As Angel says that Leah walks round the corner)



Leah: Whats going on here, (Looks at Angel) Why are you here.
Cleo: (Before Angel can say anything) Shouting at her Mum, How could you do it, Why
Leah: It's not like you think it is.
Cleo: What do you mean it's not like i think it is, are you or are you not seeing another man?
Leah: Yes, but Cleo it's



Cleo: NO Mum it's not but, it's you are, do you know what you are? your a "TART"
Leah: (Not happy with what Cleo just called her, Leah slaps Cleo across the face)

Angel: ( Fuming from what she has just seen, loses it and gives Leah a right hook)



Steve: (Shouting get out, just go)
Leah: (Now trying to say sorry to Cleo)



Cleo: No Mum, you just hit me, i want you to go.
Steve: (Stepping in) Leah just go. get out before i call to police.

(Leah then go's) and then Angel go's to leave.



Steve: "Angel" Where areyou going.
Angel: I think i should go to, i should not have done that in front of Cleo, i should know better than that.
Cleo: (Hugging Angel) don't go please, i know you were only trying to protect me, and because you care.



Angel: Yes i was sweetie, but still i shouldn't have done it in front of you.
Cleo: It's ok, don't worry about it.
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